English 1119 Spm Essay Writing

German Cycling Cup 2012

Norderstedt, 2. Mai 2012. Das Merkur Cycling Team fährt in der Wettkampfsaison 2012 weiter in der Erfolgspur. Nach dem souveränen Sieg durch Beate Zanner und dem Dreifacherfolg durch Christian Dengler, Patrick Lichan und Daniel Knyss bei der „Tour d’Energie“ Ende April in Göttingen konnte das Jedermann-Team der Merkur Druck GmbH auch am 1. Mai beim Frankfurter Radklassiker überzeugen.

Als Lohn für die harte Arbeit bei der Škoda Velotour sprang „doppeltes Gelb“ für das Merkur Cycling Team heraus. Beate Zanner gewann auch das dritte Frauenrennen im German Cycling Cup souverän und ihr Teamkollege Patrick Lichan durfte sich nach dem anspruchsvollen Ritt durch den Taunus erstmalig das Führungstrikot der nationalen Jedermannrennserie überstreifen.

„Das war eine großartige Leistung des Teams beim der Škoda Velotour. Es war klar, dass das ein ganz harter Arbeitstag für die Jungs wird. Endlich durfte sich mit Patrick Lichan einer unserer Fahrer das Gelbe Trikot überstreifen“, freute sich Teamchef Markus Adam am Tag nach dem Rennen. „Bei allem Jubel um die Leistung der Männer dürfen wir unsere Beate Zanner nicht vergessen. Rechnet man das Vorjahr mit ein hat sie am Maifeiertag in Frankfurt zum 13. Mal hintereinander gewonnen. Das ist eine einmalige Leistung und unterstreicht ihre Stärke.“



Die Merkur Druck-Topfahrerin war auch in Frankfurt das Maß aller Dinge und verteidigte souverän die Gesamtführung im German Cycling Cup. Die Thüringerin gewann das 103 Kilometer lange Rennen mit einem Vorsprung von fast sechs Minuten vor Martina Lambracht (Sonosan-Multipower). Dritte wurde Julia Hanebuth aus München.

Bei den Männern siegte Frederik Nagel (Team Strassacker) als Solist vor Eduard Schwarzkopf (Team Taunus-Express) und Niklas Gimpel (Radsport Rhein-Neckar). Merkur Druck-Fahrer Merlin Spranz führte als Elfter das RaceTeam über die Ziellinie. Thomas Jablonski (12.), Göttingen-Sieger Christian Dengler (13.), Daniel Knyss (14.), Patrick Lichan (15.) und Christoph Mönig (16.) komplettierten die guten Ergebnisse des Merkur Cycling Teams, das nach dem dritten von elf Rennen die Mannschaftswertung verteidigen konnte.



Bei der Frankfurter Škoda Velotour trat das Jedermann-Team der Norderstedter Druckerei über die 103 Kilometer lange Strecke in die Pedale. Nach dem Start in Eschborn folgte ein anspruchsvoller Ritt durch den Taunus. Dabei stellte sich der Feldberg nach einer Pause wieder den zahlreichen Teilnehmerinnen und Teilnehmern in den Weg bevor es durch den Zielbereich der Profis in der Frankfurter Innenstadt zurück zum Jedermann-Startort Eschborn ging.

Der Startschuss zum vierten Wertungsrennen um die Deutsche Jedermannmeisterschaft, die erstmalig im Rahmen des German Cycling Cups ausgetragen wird, fällt am 13. Mai in Ostthüringen beim „Schleizer Dreieck“.

Mehr Infos zum Rennen in Frankfurt: http://www.eschborn-frankfurt.de/

Die Termine 2012 German Cycling Cup / Deutsche Meisterschaft:
09. April  „Rund um Köln“- ŠKODA Velodom (Ostermontag)
22. April  Tour d’ Energie Göttingen
01. Mai  ŠKODA Velotour Frankfurt
13. Mai  Schleizer Dreieck Jedermann
20. Mai  Neuseen Classics – Zwenkau
24. Juni  Circuit Cycling Hockenheimring
11. - 12. August Alpecin Days Ostwestfalen
25. und 26. August Bremen Challenge
01.- 02. September Rad am Ring Nürburgring
28. - 30. September Rothaus Riderman Bad Dürrheim
03. Oktober   Sparkassen Münsterland Giro
Infos unter http://www.cycling-cup.de

Merkur Cycling Team auf FACEBOOK!


These are the criteria for getting the best grades (A1 and A2, 41 - 50 marks):

1) Hardly any mistakes in grammar (including spelling and punctuation)

2) Effective use of varied sentence structures

3) Wide vocabulary, used expressively/precisely

4) Good and relevant points

5) Coherence in paragraphing

6) Well-organised paragraphing

7) Essay is very interesting and shows originality

(Click here for the full list of the marking band)


Here are the tips on how to write a good essay, based on each criterion:

1) Hardly any mistakes in grammar (including spelling and punctuation)

Good essays should be without any major grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors. So, focus on these key aspects. Make sure that you know the grammar rules well and apply them when you write. To learn grammar, click here. To understand the importance of learning grammar, click here.


2) Effective use of varied sentence structures

Many students face problems with the sentence structure of the English language. The problem can be solved through plenty of reading. When you read, your mind is fed with the correct sentence structures over and over. In time, you will be able to write sentences with the right structure. When you write an essay, use a variety of sentences - simple, compound, complex, sentences in both the active voice and passive voice, etc. Thus, it is advisable to make good use of as much variety of reading material as possible - storybooks, magazines, newspapers, etc. to expose yourself to different types of sentence structures.To read, click here for the reading room of this website and click here to read SPM model essays.


3) Wide vocabulary, used expressively/precisely

Reading helps to increase your vocabulary. When you see a new word, look it up in a dictionary to learn its meaning. To score high marks, you need to show that you have a wide vocabulary. For example, you can use 'delighted' or 'overjoyed' instead of 'happy'. Instead of using 'sad', use 'upset' or 'downhearted'. Try not to use the same word repeatedly. Use different words with the same meaning to impress the examiner. It is also important that you use a word precisely or accurately. Wrong use of words result in mark deduction. So, make sure that a word is suitable to be used in a sentence or a particular situation before using it. Make good use of the 'Increase your vocabulary' section of this website to help you build your vocabulary. Reading helps you understand the meaning of a word accurately. When you read extensively, you tend to be familiar with words and know when to use them and when not to. Look it up in a dictionary again when you forget the meaning of a particular word. To learn a new word each day, go to the home page of this website or click here. To learn the words that were featured in the past, click here.


4) Good and relevant points

When writing an essay, it is important to write about relevant points, or write about what the question ask for. For example, for the title 'Describe an outing with your friends', the whole essay should be about the outing. If you write about other things such as your friends' hobbies, that would be irrelevant. As long as you understand the title and write relevant points, you will be safe. The lack of points or ideas is a common problem faced by students when writing essays. Reading model essays helps a lot, since it gives you plenty of ideas. To read SPM model essays, click here. To look at past year paper essay titles and the model answers, click here.


5) Coherence in paragraphing & 6) Well-organised paragraphing

An Oxford dictionary defines 'coherence' as 'the situation in which all the parts of something fit together well'. For instance, when writing an essay entitled 'My Hero', it is advisable to write about things that are of the same nature in a paragraph. For example, after the introduction, you can write about the childhood of your hero in the first paragraph. Then, in the second, third, fourth and fifth paragraphs, you can write about his educational background, occupation, personalities and accomplishments respectively. It is unwise to mix them up as it lacks coherence and is not well-organised.


7) Essay is very interesting and shows originality

An interesting essay does not talk about the boring stuff. For example, you decide to write an essay entitled 'Describe an enjoyable weekend you have experienced' and describe a camping trip at the beach with your family. Avoid including stuff like:

"When I woke up that morning, I went to the toilet to brush my teeth and wash my face. After that, I dressed up and went downstairs to have my breakfast. I have bread and butter for breakfast..."

You can put it this way:

"When I woke up that morning, I was excited as my whole family would be going on a camping trip at the beach. After getting everything ready, we set off for the beach in my father's van..."

You can continue the essay by describing all the interesting things that you and your family saw and did at the beach. It is a good idea to write about your own experience, since it shows originality. When writing essays, it is also important to write about logical things.

Click here for Dr Grammar's tips on how to write a good essay.


Stated above are the important points to note. Apart from those based on the criteria, other points to take note of include:

i) Practise writing essays, since 'practice makes perfect'. Besides school assignments, try to write more essays and have someone qualified to correct them for you. When you make mistakes, learn from them and make it a point not to repeat them again, in order to improve your writing skills effectively. When practising, learn to finish an essay within the time frame given. For instance, in SPM, you have about an hour to complete an essay. Spend about 10 minutes, 35 minutes and 15 minutes on planning, writing and checking the essay respectively. If you wish to, you can submit your essays to Dr Grammar. After Dr Grammar has corrected your essays, they will be included in the "Students' Essays" section. You can then compare the corrected essay with your original essay to find out where your weak points are and improve accordingly. To submit an essay, click here.

ii) Remember, there are no short cuts to success. Essay writing skills take time to develop. There goes the saying, 'Rome wasn't built in a day'. Diligence and perseverance are the keys to success. Do not give up until you succeed. If you face problems or have any questions, do not hesitate to contact Dr Grammar. To submit a question, click here.

iii) Look at the past year papers and study the examination format. Then, refer to the model answers and familiarise yourself with the answering techniques in order to score high marks. To look at the essay titles of past year papers and model answers, click here.


To summarise:

1 Learn the grammar rules well and be familiar with them.

2 Do more reading, as it helps in all aspects of writing good essays.

3 Practise writing essays and learn from your mistakes.
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